I think that the copy is too long. I think the last sentence would be enough. You could add a title to the bottle itself that looks like the name of the drug but says something like: OTC Drugs.
The title on the cap doesn't really grab me eventhough it is accurate. How about...Harm without a perscription or Hurting more than they cure?
Love the concept of the bottle. I think the text needs to be as sharp as the visual.
I think that the copy is too long. I think the last sentence would be enough. You could add a title to the bottle itself that looks like the name of the drug but says something like: OTC Drugs.
ReplyDeleteThe title on the cap doesn't really grab me eventhough it is accurate. How about...Harm without a perscription or Hurting more than they cure?
Love the concept of the bottle. I think the text needs to be as sharp as the visual.